Monday, September 12, 2011

First Thoughts Response

1) I thought that this assignment was something different.  I wasn't quite sure why I was writing this analysis in a crayon.  I was also thinking how I was going to fit three paragraphs onto the front half of the construction paper. As far as the writing portion, I didn't feel myself thinking any differently on the information or find myself coming up with different ideas.  Despite having to write this assignment in crayon, I took this assignment seriously, as if it was any other analysis I would have to write.  The one thing that had bothered me was the smudging of the crayon from time to time.

2) Students      Adjectives Describing    What makes page so [adjective]  Why page is so [adjective]
         5                      Bland, Plain                     One color used, no detail                  No emotion in writing
         6                      Colorful                 Important words are in different color         Emphasized key words
         9                 Detailed, Emotional              Good use of vocabulary                 Told reader view on lying
        11                    Organized              Explains confusing sections of poem       Written straight across page
        14                    Interesting               Created a picture at bottom of page       Picture shows meaning too
        17                 Helpful, Neat    Explains each stanza of poem, neat handwriting      Great penmanship
         2                    Different             Each section of analysis had different color    Set up of page is different

3) If there was a culture that only used crayon as writing implements, the world as we know it would be much different.  A culture would be very proud of it's creativity.  Also, writing would be very selective and we would most likely see more expression through pictures.  Cultures would have to choose carefully what they want to express and how they want to express it.  The way that we write would change forever if this was to go into effect.

4) Some general observations about writing implements and bodies I would want to venture is:
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    Some general observations about writing implements and thinks I would want to venture is:
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